A Week of Concept Vehicles on Fiction Science

In trying to diversify Fiction Science topic-wise,I continued talking about Deep Blue Sea and added Star Wars into the mix.


Dureing my research forlast week’s video about the sharks in Deep Blue Sea I cameacross an interesting piece of concept art for a sequel that was never made. The sequel did not have the most promising of circumstances and would probably have been as bad as the one we ultimately did get, but the U.S.S. Trident is a really interesting idea for a ship specialized in handling a squad of intelligent fish.
It does have its share of problems, though. Most importantly the fact that those open pods could potentially sink the ship unless the rooms they are in are airtight.

As a sidenote, this was the first video I used hashtags on. I added them to the older videos, as well. From now on, all videos will show three hashtags on their Youtube page. These include one for Fiction Science, one for their series and one for the franchise they are talking about.

An Unpopular Opinion

In the Star Wars community, it is a safe bet to say most people who have heard of it hate the AT-HS. The A-HS or Heavy Scout Walker is a walker that was set to appear in The Last Jedi but was cut at the last moment. This resulted in the walker’s absence on screen, but a Lego set had already been produced an hit shelves alongside the movie.
It was an unusual machine even for a walker with its eight crab-like legs. A variation with even more legs did appear as a specialized hauler, though.
The Lego set did not get a warm welcome from reviewers, either. One strange thing was the wheels it had under its legs. Many questioned what the point of those was until concept art showed up in The Art of The Last Jediand it became clear that the wheels were not part of the walker design but of the Lego machenism to make the legs move.
Still, though, the wheels reminded me of a HiRail vehicle and with that in mind, this becomes the best scout walker in any of the Star Wars films. I made a video on why that is.

This is the first time I recorded original video content for one of these. Like I said in the video, I used my toy review set I have for the German channel Extra Extra. And thanks to this crossover, I got to add the Heavy Scout Walker to my glorious arachnodroid army!

Next Up

The next video planned is a first round of recommendations of good videos from around Youtube. Let’s see how that turns out.
After that, I will tackle sequels and the common problem of sequels not understanding the original. So, something a bit closer to traditional video essays.

Fiction Science Becomes Video

This summer, I tasked myself with updating my book discussing the various dinosaurs of Jurassic Park and Jurasic World. It is called The Dinosaurs of Jurassic Park and Jurassic World. Not because I’m lazy but because that makes it well-findable. Which I just decided is a word now.
Yet, I also found myself in a situation where the first edition was three years old and I had failed to come upwith a follow-up. This book was a real success, yet failed to find another franchise to make a whole book about that had not been written yet. The one exceptions would have been The Biology of Star Trek when Star Trek: Discovery turned out to be unusually biology-centered but I was not that deep into Star Trek lore and Discovery eventually shifted away to become a more traditional sf show.
At the same time, written books started to face a decline asopposed to audio books and video. Audio books where never my cup of tea because I am unable to listen to a whole book without giving my eyes anything to do while my ears where busy. But when my eyes where busy, I lost track of what my ears received. Like I said, not my thing. They did not have to be that long, though.

This is where I saw a chance to make more Fiction Science content. If all I could do was short pieces about specific questions for each franchise, why not make this a strength? If I made videos instead of books, lenth would not be a problem anymore. Videos between five and ten minutes were fine, and this was just what I would be going for.
Thus, Fiction Science, the Youtube channel was born. The design is still a work in progress, though.


Before I did anything I wanted to introduce the idea. So I created this video about the general idea, how it came about, and what to expect.

The First JP/JW Batch

There was originally a introduction video to the franchise I recorded and uploaded. But Youtube only allows for two channels to be verified with the same phone number within twelve months and I had already done so. Thus, the video failed to publish for being to long (non-verified channels are limited to 15 minutes, the intro had about 20). Good thing, too, though. The original plan to release critiques on all species present in the park one at a time, like I did with my book The Dinosaurs of Jurassic Park and Jurassic World, never came to be.
It proved far better suited to the project to base each episode around a central question or story. I did record audio for Critter Critique videos on Carnotaurus, Ceratosaurus, and Stegosaurus (as well as parts of a two-parter on Velociraptor) before I realized I wanted to go a different route about this.
The intro still explains how Jurassic World justified its approach to displaying outdated dinosaurs, why that matters little and how the videos really don’t try to spoil anybody’s fun and just use the movies as an aid for education.
It has been uploaded and is ready to go, I am just not sure I want to publish it anymore when the channel has changed so much from what I originally thought it would be like. Its announcement of me going through all the dinosaurs by the time Jurassic World came out in the US obviously never came to be true.

For the first actual video I decided to choose a topic that comes up a lot about Jurassic Park, usually as a plothole or scientific error when it really isn’t either of those things. The first movie and novel make mention of extinct plants in the park. Many question where these came from when the creatures are made from dinosaur blood.
But, when you consider what amber actually is and you learn a little bit more about mosquitoes, an abundance of prehistoric plants in the park makes a lot of sense. In fact, there should be more than just one species of these on the island.
This is also when I decided to add a banner at the bottom for consistent branding. It’s probably the largest watermark of any channel but it works pretty well for branding. It’s consistent with the books that way, the second edition featuring this shade of blue on its serial banner, as well. In all honesty,it also helps cove rup watermarks from channels that had no business putting their own watemarks in other people’s video content (like trailers) anyway. I am thinking of playing around with the blue band a bit when the occasion arises.

One thing I don’t like about these first few videos is my voice. While I do like my voice fine, I had a hard time not making it sound flat. I have been doing videos while in front of a camera or while reading from a script for some time and that works fine. For Fiction Science I talk without a script. That requires talking and thinking at the same time and it becomes harder to also add some voice modulation to sound more engaging.
These first few videos served as learning experiences for that. I have aleady improved in that regard and expect to continue doing so. This is fine imho. To improve, I need to fail a lot. As long as I realize my shortcomings, I can overcome them. This is also why I waited until now to write this article.

To start with the main attractions of Jurassic World, the dinosaurs, I did some research. Yes, I checked what dinosaur from the series is the most viable to make a video about by looking at search volume and numbe rof videos available.
Stygimoloch came out on top by a wide margin and luckily this is one dinosaur that is interesting to talk about. Because it should not be in the movie. Not only was it completely overhyped in marketing for something playing such a minor role in it, it also likely never existed as a separate dinosaur. And that is not by just somebody’s opinion, but by that of the very paleontologist who is responsible for the scientific viability of the franchise’s creatures.
Funny enough, nobody has yet made a video about that. So I did.
And I gave it a really clickbait-y title.

Next, I decided to delve further into the topic of the confusing back-and-forth in dinosaur naming with new names popping up and old ones disappearing all the time. I picked the sauropods for that topic because Apatosaurus is one of the most famous cases of this with Brachiosaurus also affected. This was a perfect jumping-off point. To add to that, there is little else to talk about especially in regards to Apatosaurus. I will get back to Brachiosaurus later on, though.
This is also the first time I created a custom thumbnail and started a video with that. So instead of a video still, there is now soem more text in addition to the actual title to better communicate the video’s content. This enabled me to give the videos a more grounded title with the semi-clickbait in the picture instead.
Ihave no idea why the preview cuts off Brachiosaurus’ head, however. Its fine in the video.

There are more videos on Jurassic Park and Jurassic World coming down the line, but I want to avoid the impression this is a Jurassic Park channel. There are plenty of those and there is nothing wrong with that, it’s just not what I want this channel to be limited to.

On to New Shores

Last week’s major movie launch was The Meg. I did not think there is much to talk about in The Meg when it comes to biology. But I saw a trailer for Deep Blue Sea 2 the other week. That reminded me of the first movie, which is really good and remembered fondly on Youtube. So I switched to that movie instead and tooka look at the sharks.
This marks the first actual Critter Critique. However, their was little to talk about the sharks themselves, yet much more to talk about the background and plot. So I did this.

I feel this video was a significant step forward for me. My vice modulation is much better now, not remotely as flat as before. I did have the problem of running out of things to say somewhat, but I think it’s alright and at least now it sounds much better.

Next Up

The plan from now on is to have two new videos each week, preferably one each Monday and Thursday. The next ones will be another video on Deep Blue Sea, followed by Star Wars (for which I spent €26 in Lego, so it better be worth it), and a first round of video recommendations. After that, the new Predator starts and I will do a video on that. I have a couple of videos planned for some movie and season launches in the future. Star Trek is eventually going to be there, as well.

This blog has been suffering from a lack of content for quite some time now. With Fiction Science, this shall change. As new content will nowcome up more frequently, I will do a weekly post on new content. I am also reviving the channel that featured short and flash fiction pieces, delivering one video each Friday starting this week.